"Luck has nothing to do with success".Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
I strongly disagree with this statement because,many people think that luck doesn't play any role in people's success,while i believe that luck plays the key role in one's success.Luck is often the final factor that turns years of hard work into success.
Many successful people have admitted that luck played an important role in their career.Many inventions and ideas were created thanks to luck.It is believed that Isaac Newton was sitting under an apple tree and an apple fell on top of his head.Consequently,it made him understand that the force that makes items drop to ground is the gravitational attraction force of the Earth.This lucky situation made Newton a very successful scientist that made a huge impact on the world of science.
Luck helps many celebrities and music artists become successful.For example,movie stars.Yes,they work hard,take acting classes,live in poor ,however once they get a chance to show off themselves in a movie even not in an important role,they still can attract big producers' or scenarists' attention by their play.
In addition,many people get their dream jobs because of luck.They can work hard and diligently,but without little luck they cant get higher and higher income.Most of my acquaintances found job because they were lucky enough to meet a proper employer that can offer them a good job.
In conclusion,i believe that luck plays the key role in one's success,however working hard is also very important,because if one of these factors is missed,success is impossible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25514403292 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25589051494 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.928324576 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.4 100.406767564 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6 20.6045352989 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.45110844103 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145207538401 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891450507352 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085975206299 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891450507352 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085975206299 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 11.7677419355 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 58.1214874552 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.1575268817 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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