Many filmmakers made movie based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch movie first. What do you think?
There are some moot points about the movie that are based on a book. The question of whether it is better to read the book before watching the movie or not has aroused as a subject of controversy among movie critics. Everyone has their own zeitgeist. When it comes to my position, I strongly subscribe to the viewpoint that I prefer to read the book just after I watch the movie. I have some reasons two of which will be explicated hereunder.
The first reason worth discussing here is that many individuals watch movies for the excitement and thrill, therefore, if they read the movie story the excitement of that movie will decrease dramatically. Filmmakers try to fascinate their audience with the best screenplays and performances. Knowing the story of that give rise to movie become tedious for the audience. As a case of point I vividly remember two month age my friend reserved two seats in a cinema, after e reached to the cinema I noticed that the film was Cinderella, which I read that books 8 years ago, consequently, that film was not amazing for me and I went to the cinema lobby and drink some coffee! My personal experience competently corroborates this idea that when the audience knows the story of a movie they have not any excitement toward that movie.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned is that directors often change somethings in the original story because the main story is very long and bored for everyone thus, cut some part of the story which is not very significant. If we watch the movie before reading the book we can realize the pith of the book. To be more specific, with knowing the background of a book we can understand that book is worth to reading or not hence, a movie can motivate the audience to read whole the book which is original story of that movie. My personal example demonstrates this reality, when I was a senior at the university, we had a movie theater in our university, which shown a movie in a week. One the I watch the detector Poaro in our university cinema which was very astounding for me. When I googled that movie I realized that the author of this movie was Agatha Kristy who wrote many novels on the horizon of detecting. The corollary of that movie was I bought some novel of Agatha Kristy and read every night. My personal example shed some light of the point that some movie intriguing us to buy the original story of that film and continue to reading that book.
In the nutshell, according to the aforementioned reason, it is better to the audience to read the book just after watching the movie because this action not only leads to increasing the excitement but also motivate us to buy the original book of that movie.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...out the movie that are based on a book. The question of whether it is better to read the book before wa...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he story which is not very significant. If we watch the movie before reading the b...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...ity, which shown a movie in a week. One the I watch the detector Poaro in our univers...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...inema which was very astounding for me. When I googled that movie I realized that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 31.0 11.0286738351 281% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59053497942 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57354111189 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427983539095 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7589154786 48.9658058833 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.944444444 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318399766662 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125173349402 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844458240274 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221665442224 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680247732559 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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