Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Travelling is one of the best places to learn about ourselves and new things. Travelling is us an enjoyable time that we could fully spend just for us to relax our mind and eat good food. One of the places attracts most travellers are museums. People often visit a museum when they travel to a new place because museums briefly introduce them a lot of information about the place and suitable for everyone. I will list two primary points explaining why museums attract most of the travellers.
First, museums reflect culture, people, and history of the place where it is established as a whole. The main information about the place is usually captured in its museum, which gives visitors a brief introduction of the place and allows visitor have a full understanding of the city or state throughout its history. For example, the National Palace Museum of Taiwan reflects the history from the time that the country was formed. It also shows us the life of ancient people living in Taiwan and what is the most dramatic change or shift from the past to now. I went to the museum when I visited Taipei city and found it was very interested in many precious antiques. I learned when Taiwan was established and why it chose democratism instead of communism. The place was worth visiting when I was discovering the country.
Second, museums are suitable for everyone to visit regardless of age and gender. Thus, it is easy for either an individual traveller or family travelling together. In other words, travellers do not worry if the activities might be too tired for their kids or their parent. Everyone can find museum interesting in their own way. Parents and old people can enjoy the history while children learn about history and discover the souvenir areas. It also creates a good scenery that travellers can take photos together. When I visited Chimei museum which is the most famous museum in Tainan, I saw many groups of travellers taking a picture with the statues and enjoy a cup of coffee in the beautiful garden of the museum.
To sum up, travellers find museums attractive and usually add the place to their plan. It gives them a chance to know better the place where they are visiting. Furthermore, it provides them with a place to spend time with their family with an easy visit. Travellers should consider museums in the first place of visit when they go travel.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, furthermore, if, second, so, thus, while, as for, for example, in other words, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78208232446 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53154155338 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501210653753 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6675860113 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8695652174 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9565217391 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302083089226 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940025917961 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780841963967 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199297730551 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268103374359 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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