Nowadays, people are busy with many things. If you were given a short period of time. what would you choose?
1, learn to play a new sport you never played.
2. learn to cook food in a different way
3, learn to do some hand-made work like clothes
Choosing a new habit is difficult for people because of the limited amount of their spare time. While some people consume their time to play a new sport, other people consider learning the different methods of cooking. Moreover, the alternative option of them is cultivating the skill of some hand-made work like clothes. It is so controvertible for people to decide a specific selection. In my view, I would like to pick up playing a new sport I have not ever played. It definitely makes my brain more diverse, eases their feeling, and improves my health.
To begin with, playing a new sport provide people with more intelligent knowledge. People sometimes exploit their brains and wisdom as the way to cope with the obstacles they have to face. For example, when people play basketball, they focus on how they brush up the ability to better shooting and passing skills. Then, they utilize their knowledge as much as they can to be a better player. These actions make our perspective of the way to educate ourselves.
Secondly, people can establish moderate emotion to consume confined time on playing a new sport. People often obtain stress from daily bases such as a bunch of harsh working environments, devastating friendship, and their ideal future, and so on. The owned hobbies by people produce an opportunity not to mediate their work and their house chores. Take myself as an example, when I was a university student, I struggled with blurred future vision. Therefore, I could not concentrate on my studies at each class and plenty of relationships with my friends. On the other hand, after I had joined the basketball club since I became a sophomore, I could dedicate myself to consider all my problems. Consequently, people create a satisfying feeling for their problems to play a new sport.
Finally, the opportunity to play a new sport develops people’s health. In short spared time, people try to act to be lazy. For instance, they frequently use their smartphone to communicate with their friends, watch abundant YouTube channels they are interested in, and play bountiful games in deep. From these activities, the risk of infecting diseases would gradually increase because there is a large amount of time when they are sitting on the chair. In contrast, once people play a new sport, their body would be more shape and grasp the immune against overwhelming diseases.
To sum up, people should play a new sport to make the use of limited time. I surely believe that they can chew on anything they want by profound knowledge, relieve their feeling, and acquire an advanced healthy body.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in short, such as, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9589977221 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69284327071 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53986332574 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5679570793 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.08 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.56 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234335353732 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782509478771 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669665705208 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143991276797 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561756718817 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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