In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Nowadays, there are plenty of resources to gather the news happening around the world and it is of vital importance to keep us updated on the worldly events. Some may argue that it is not necessary to gather news from all possible resources. I, on contrary believe that a person must collect the information from various resources which I would explain in the following paragraphs.
The worldly news can be viewed through numerous news channels on television, plenty of news magazines, news papers and social media. There are certain magazines which focus only on a particular genre such as movie, politics, health etc. Reading the news from various resources not only broaden our perspectives by unwrapping our ignorance and shedding some light on worldly events. With the globalisation springing up, it is of utmost importance to pay attention to even some trivial things. This will enable us to widen our spectrum of knowledge.
Moreover, various budget plan, government policies and scandals can only be understood through various resources. Some of the magazines in my country, for instance, are run by politicians, who publish the only the news in favour of their party. So, no matter what the other party does, the news never get published. So, just by reading one resource, we may be biased about a particular party and policies. Focussing on social media for reading the news, however is not a good or reliable resource because often it spreads the fake news. On contrary, the news channels telecast the video or pictures of the events or political meet, which makes it more reliable and authentic.
Admittedly, watching news channels or reading news papers iterate the same news again .This in turn may consume our productive time and does not provide any new information.
To conclude, I feel gathering news information from various resources provide us a vivid knowledge on events and policy changes all over the world. This alleviate our ignorance on many aspects and enlighten us with necessary knowledge on the worldly news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, so, then, even so, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1130952381 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6952391469 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7675738175 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.058823529 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228774445335 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07257550001 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529847591306 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131636670953 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356844845892 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.