“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
There can be many different opinion on the viewpoint but I believe that the impact of internet on the life of people is considerable and more positive than negative. It is my firm belief that, internet has changed life of many people and I feel this for many reasons which I will be exploring int the essay.
First of all, internet has proved to be a helping to many students around the world. Easy availability of internet has acted as an incentive for many children. The information that is available on the internet has enabled students to learn and understand even when they have no one to teach. Drawing from my own personal expierence, internet has helped me in my studies and made it easier for me to understand complicated concept by providing easy access to simple material. Internet has not olny been proven beneficial for students but also for teachers. Today, professor are not bounded by class bondaries as they can convey their message and share study material through internet. This innovation, therefore has had a huge impact on education sector.
Secondly, it has become easier for people to communicate. There was a time where everyone faced difficulty to communicate with people staying abroad. Communicating with a person staying abroad was expensive and even when one was able to afford, the talk would not be clear. Innovation of internet has solved this problem and today people arrange meeting, talk to their loved ones without caring much about expenses or hassle free communication. Thanks to internet because it made my life easier while I was pursuing my master in United state. I could talk to my parents at any time and was able to share my problems with them and due to this I never felt lonely.
Overall, internet is been beneficial to every one and has had many positive effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
There can be many different opinion on the viewpoint but I believe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87781350482 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63900765642 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556270096463 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2875230473 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117730287864 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428697222209 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394155142495 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890499807984 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348677188315 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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