People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
I think it is a controversial topic, but I do believe that people traveling to a foreign country can be more useful than traveling in their own country, and this opinion is based on many reasons.
First of all, I think communicating with people from different countries means contacting with different cultures, backgrounds and perspectives, which can be a very fruitful experience for a person to build up his personality and to combine different thoughts.
Also, traveling abroad for education can be the man's best opportunity to pursue his dream and to build his career, which is my case, as applying to masters abroad has been my dream since I joined college, as getting master degree abroad will help me communicate with students from all over the over which will widen my communications' network, also it means that I can get a better job with of course a better salary in the track of my passion.
I think another benefit from traveling to a foreign country is to visit different sights form different cultures which is a very interesting for many people to do.
Another reason is interacting with people on their daily basis while they are living different lives from yours can modify some of your habits or behaviors, in a good way hopefully.
Also, I find it an excellent opportunity to learn new languages, as I believe that practice makes perfect, so of course practicing with native people is a plus.
On the other hand, I find traveling in your country won't provide you with the same experience or , as it is pretty possible that there won't be a huge difference in culture of traditions, also it may cost you more to spend a vacation or to study for higher degrees in your country than traveling abroad to get that, I find it a complete loss because of the previous reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, i think, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74760383387 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76400097825 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523961661342 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.1344086022 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.216023681 48.9658058833 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.285714286 100.406767564 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.7142857143 20.6045352989 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 5.45110844103 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294728890184 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153853534227 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116521322141 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153853534227 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116521322141 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 11.7677419355 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.0537634409 195% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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