People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
There is a large quantity of people who work for earning money. However, financial concerns are considered as superfluous reasons according to some people. There are two central points behind this way of thinking, which are enlightened in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, gaining experience is the vital force behind working. Some employing a group of people are engaged with profitless works to specialize in their fields and expand their networks substantially. As a result, these profitless works will be a booster step for them to get a qualified job with a high salary. Internships are a great example of explaining this situation. A vast amount of university students are in search of internships to leverage their theoretical knowledge in the practical ground. The companies offer a job to these students to make contributions in their entity with a zero or little amount of money. In this way, students increase their chances to find qualified jobs in the future.
Secondly, some people are fond of satisfying their humanistic drives by being part of volunteering works. They participate in non-profit organizations to help people who are in need. For example, many aid agencies are active in Africa to provide the basic necessities to impoverished lands. These agencies work with numerous volunteers to improve their living conditions. Volunteers serve this purpose by educating the illiterate people, building health awareness or delivering them nourishment.
In conclusion, money can be an insignificant interest to some people. There can be other phenomenons that are prioritized.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ies are active in Africa to provide the basic necessities to impoverished lands. These agencies w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49193548387 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1297284726 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4664048982 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1176470588 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203047122993 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615199200508 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583756809785 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117948190995 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367929332098 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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