Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many individuals are becoming more associated with dangerous sports recently. They attach to the attraction of extreme activities. There exist two primary reasons for explaining this inclination.
Firstly, people desire to have the feeling of excitement be released out intensely. Practicing dangerous sports meet their demand in the best condition because this type of sports facilities them to experience the high sensation of pleasure. They enjoy feeling the increase of adrenalin while they are overcoming formidable challenges and severe struggles. For example, there are many sportsmen who professionally perform extreme sports even though they are aware of the risks.
Furthermore, no matter what they have gone through many crucial injuries multiple times, the immense energy inside of them still continues as an everlasting source that keeps alive the encouragement.
Secondly, escapement from the monotonous style of daily life is a key reason that indicates clearly why people are attracted to dangerous sports. People are in search of alternative things that are supposed to bring them a new breeze on their ordinary lives. They are willing to get rid of the high pressured stress which influences their mood negatively. As a consequence, a bewildering array of extreme activities serve them with a lot of great options that claim to add exciting moments on their tedious lives. For example, coastal regions reach a high peak of tourism receipts thanks to the high demand for dangerous sports some of which are parachuting, paragliding and bungee jumping. Touristic destinations which are located in the mountains also receive a great number of tourist due to the snowboard facilities.
In conclusion, the question of why people are attracted to dangerous sports has wide-ranging answers. As illuminated above, two major answers can be disputed in terms of seeking excitement and adventure.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5306122449 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92944830315 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6164718741 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205275438047 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066006692733 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747992869199 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113470686874 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066516414613 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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