People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
The main motivation that pushes people to work can be ascribed to several driving forces. Although, the money is a key factor among other ones / the others, it cannot be defined as the solitary tendency imposing people to be occupied in their careers. The interest and social responsibility in some cases are so critical that the importance of money or salary which is paid to people can be neglected. To consider a society composing numerous jobs, people are not typically assigned their positions according to their interests. Sometimes, the huge amount of money as the salary of a job paying regularly justifies the cause of the question why they work against their interests. On the other hand, there are some jobs in whichinterest and social responsibility can be the only reasons obliging people to work with negligible salary. The artists and journalists who create particular kinds of art, are the good examples of this case. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples are presented.
First and foremost, the money is the most crucial factor that comes to the mind of everybody in order to respond to the question why people work in the conditions that cannot be accepted generally. working in the/- tough conditions involving traveling to foreign countries, suffering from harsh weather, remarkably consuming both physical and mental energy, accompanying significant distress, etc can only be justified by the salary paid to workers. Regarding the point that life cannot be solely considered as the smooth way and is frequently in conjunction with lots of fluctuations, people need to live to gain/ earn money by working in those situations. But if the money of those jobs is not considerable, is there an answer to justify the reason to tolerate the jobs? Absolutely yes! social responsibility motivates people to accept some duties even against their interest and comfort. The/- people who work in polluted service jobs, army, and intelligence agencies that jeopardize their lives to bring security to their country are the good examples of this category. The development of a society indispensability requires several responsibilities that unquestionably need a minority of people in order to sacrifice their comfort and bring about comfort for a majority of society population. As a result, social responsibility is another reason that people work.
To recapitulate, in addition to money, social responsibility and sense of satisfaction are other reasons of the question why people work. Although the expense of life accelerates everybody to do a job and earn/ make some money, careful social and psychological investigations have remarked other tendencies for people’s working. Due to the critical role of human resource in the development of a country, it is highly recommended that assigning people different tasks according to their interests ratherthan attract them by money. Concerning this matter, the role of psychologists to be the right hand of human resource managers can not be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, in addition, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2572.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30309278351 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05644705787 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490721649485 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.354317284 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320774435116 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112639001237 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067911361528 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239117714435 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377874355266 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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