Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
internet is the first priority of people to get the information. some people believe that browsing internet is better than using books. But I believe, printed material such as books and articles are the best way for the following reasons.
To begin with, no one can deny that gathering information from the internet is easy. On the other side, people do not know whether the information and the details collected from the internet are reliable. For instance, everyone can use the internet, and create their own pages which makes it so complicated to find the authorized and original article. Whereas the books were published and authorized by the original authors. Thus, people can trust printed books and articles for their research.
Additionally, browsing internet is not only reliable that also distracts us in many ways. For example, there are lots of advertisements displayed when we browse. These advertisements gain our attention and distract us from our topic of research. Besides, they also navigate people's attention to some other areas which results in loss of time.
Finally, reading books also allows people's brain to stay calm. To derive, a study from "The Hindu" newspaper shows that reading helps people's mind to refresh, and to enhance the level of IQ power for the brain. Therefore, using printed materials also supports us in healthy way and not using the internet.
To sum it up, depending on the articles and books are wiser than browsing the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19341563786 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65957625672 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576131687243 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1980582947 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.875 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251808929413 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844349067764 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087094177939 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146868834206 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768589888114 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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