Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The internet is very important in our society. it often determins level of success. Some people belive that using of the internet is better than using of pronted material to do research. others hold the opposite view. In my view, the internet is more useful to do research for two important reasons.
The first reason is the internet is accesseble easily to do research. when you use the internet, you can get more information about. Therefore, researhs will be more comprehensive and faster. For exmpale, in the past time, a few researcher accessed to the internet, so the siecne graw very slowly. they use printed material such as books to extend any subjet throughout the world. As over time, because the internet develope in all over the world, sholars could share everything learning in their exprements. Fortunately, the internet have a lot of web site about anything only in a few seconds. As you can see, the internet is useful to do research.
second is researchers can help each together. If you have problem in your research, you can get help from other people by using the internet easily. Thus, the internet would accelerate sience growth. For instance, when researchers study in s special field, they may run into a lot of issue. Luckily, nowadays there are many way to settle these problems. The best way is to use the internet because all people in the world access to it, and also they have contant with each other conveniencly. they can request from people to solve they problems. This clearly demonstrate that using the internet is benificial to do research.
In sum, the internet is better than printed materials. Not only does the internet is accesseble, but also is helpful to fix the problem. We should all use internet to develope faster our knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...et is accesseble easily to do research. when you use the internet, you can get more ...
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...hensive and faster. For exmpale, in the past time, a few researcher accessed to the inter...
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...ternet, so the siecne graw very slowly. they use printed material such as books to e...
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...rements. Fortunately, the internet have a lot of web site about anything only in a few secon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62689550347 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0907682103 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.75 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373646903556 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116858540194 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121762905655 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249011841309 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598387222818 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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