Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people watch comedies in preference to serious movies, as I do, while others like serious more.
To begin with, there are a lot of terrible things that happened every day such crimes, murders, and etc. We hear about them by news or internet. This flow of negative coupled with our own problems make us to think in black tones. It poisons us. However, there is a way to fill the everyday routine by joy. The answer is comedies. They are simple to understanding and always ends happy. If we have a hard day, we can switch the TV and watch a comedy then the end of the day will be much pleasured. It is known, that a human needs positive emotions and if the routine does not provide them, we have to find them be ourselves. So a comedy is a wonderful way to get rid of stress and receive a bit of positive emotions.
What is more, we force to think every minute of our life. By the necessity to think I mean questions like: What to do or eat? Where to go? How to accomplish a task? Plenty of questions and problems appear in every minute of our lives despite our desires. We manage them and may spend almost all of our energy to the end of the day. As a result, we simply do not have efforts to think about a puzzle in a serious movie since we are overloaded with life problems. We may not want to face another one. Moreover, comedies are often dealing with a better world than ours. For instance, the good always wins and the bad is defeated. Watching such films increase our belief in world justice and help to put up with injustice in our life. It makes us more satisfied with our lives.
To summarize, comedies provides an opportunity to fill the life with joy and do not think about our everyday problems. Those are the reason, why I prefer comedies over serious movies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: etc.
...appened every day such crimes, murders, and etc. We hear about them by news or internet...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry day such crimes, murders, and etc. We hear about them by news or internet. Thi...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thinking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: thinking
...ive emotions. What is more, we force to think every minute of our life. By the necess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, i mean, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33432835821 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3258118491 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.025261204 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.08 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100983661793 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282388377279 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460912991472 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873300835568 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505047992514 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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