Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records.Which approach do you prefer, and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue related to whether keeping the record of your experiences by uploading them to social-networking or not creating such a record, has brought to the attention of public. Many people do not consider keeping their photos on the social-network. However, in my opinion, uploading pictures to social sites is a new way of keeping records of your experiences.
First of all, keeping record of your memories is a nice gesture because as the time past by, people will have all their pictures organized and labeled with the time, date, and location of that event. In fact, these details are important because you could easily recall that experience. For example, as a person that always has liked to travel, I have kept all the pictures in a beautiful box. Moreover, those pictures are just there unorganized. When I look at them, I remember the good time that I spent on that day, but I cannot tell the whole story because I do not remember the day or the time, which are important element of that experience. Since that time social-networking site was not developed as it is now, I did not have that option available to use it. Now that uploading of photos is an option, I would prefer to use it because I will have the chance to organize my pictures in order. Therefore, I will easily remember more details about the event. Overall, this experience tells us that keeping your photos uploaded on the social sites, it is better because those experiences will be organized in order.
Second of all, keeping record of my own experience on social-networking sites, will help me to not only share that experience with my friends, but also talk about that good time that I had experienced. To be more specific, recently I had been on vacation to Greek islands. I had a splendid time, and I wanted to share that with my friends. If I were not going to upload pictures that I took at those beautiful places, I might never would have had a chance to talk about that experience. Because I uploaded photos on the social website, everyone knew were I had been; therefore, they started the conversation with me about the place and activities that I participated there. According to my experience, people who post their experience on social networking sites, will have a chance to share that time with their friends and talk about it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...os on the social website, everyone knew were I had been; therefore, they started the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74509803922 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82886886208 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450980392157 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.735676732 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25898290137 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880506416902 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076097787719 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21305253884 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985651426302 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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