Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which one do you prefer?
Since the dawn of humanity, mankind has always been concerned about one important element of their lives which is sleeping. At some point in time, each person may face the dilemma of being a night owl or an early bird, the choice of which can strongly affect his or her life. Having known my biological timetable and being aware of the reaction of my body, I prefer to be an early riser. Sustain one’s health and enhancing brain productivity are among the most conspicuous reasons to get up early in the morning.
There has always been a heated debate among scholars about the health consequences of getting up early or staying up late at night. Recently, research has shown that most of early risers take advantage of a better physical and mental health due to the amount of sleep they get at night. In this vein, a research conducted at Arizona State University reveals that besides being physically and mentally healthy, early risers are more positive, ambitious, and optimistic than the control group who preferred to work late at night. What’s more, people who rise early in the morning have more time to do their daily schedule and since they get enough sleep at night, they are energetic in the morning. However, according to many scholars, people who stay late at night are prone to various diseases; insomnia, anomia, heart stroke, and mental problems are among the most significant consequences.
Not only can early risers benefit from the health issues, they can also be granted the highly productivity of their mind. It is no secret to anyone that when a person gets up early in the morning, the brain will be much more charged and ready than in the middle of the day. Since there is less distraction in daytime, one can fully concentrate on his or her schedule. The rush time at night, however, causes more distraction which not only will demotivate people, but also will make them anxious and embarrassed. Obviously, some people enjoy the serenity of nighttime, however, the unforgiving mental pressure of time shortage cannot be denied.
To put it in a nutshell, although it is one’s personal choice whether to be an early riser or a night owl, the benefit of being an early riser cannot be ignored because of both the health issues and the productivity of the brain.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83037974684 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54118456066 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513924050633 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9210622215 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29095846511 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968762626819 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596315782258 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165482128909 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795833225406 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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