Some people prefer to go and visit the tourist attractions where there are many people. Others like the ones with fewer people. Which one do you prefer?
Nowadays, Tourist industry is more attractive for people around the world. There are different reason that this industry brough a great benefit and burgeoning such as improve the financial budget, advertising in media, sophisticated and widespread in route and transportation for traveler. Tourist center is a convenient place for gathering of family, friends and other individuals. I inclined to the less populated tourist attraction because of main reason. I will elaborate my perspective for following paraghraphs.
first and foremost, I prefer to choose less populated tourist attraction such as natural scenery, ancient location, recreational center since the privacy aspect. I do not like to engage with a throng a people in the row for getting ticket, restaurant and others. I believe that, I engaged with people in the work, shops and other place in routine daylife while I like a pleasure time to release to my tension, fresh spirit in a sole place with the close relatives. One important point is that in less populated I can have a more concentrated connection with nature and attractive place.
ANother equally noteworthy point for authetice my viewpoint is the untouched aspect of it. It is more appealing for me visiting a poupoualted location because it maybe had less damaged of manipulated from the former shape. There are plenty of tourist location that have been changed the form and path to facil availability for visitors for instance building roads, parking, resturants and others. My own example is compelling evidence for this claim. I have some mountaineering with my friends at Tochal mountain which is a one of most interesting place for Tehran resident even other city. There are a lot of manipulated path in the shape of nature that is not natural such as making a artificial parks, stair, bed of river that is not proportinate for a natural location. Even worse, there a lot of trash on the ground that lefted by irrespective visitors. I like to climbe to untouched stone and path in the mountain, march in a intact jungle or desert. Not wanting to repute to importance of visting the populated tourist attraction, I prefer to visiting this kind of location.
To put in a nutshell, visiting the prestigious tourist attraction could have plenty of lucrative value for us but I prefer to see a reculsive place. Visitign a sole or less populated place will have some advantage such as a privacy and unspoiled environment, better spiritual connection with location.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09024390244 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.944589408 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507317073171 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9254559041 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.35 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222662582934 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670118683259 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631324496919 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144722941249 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067268705755 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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