Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays many people tend to abandon their small hometowns and move to big cities. Some others though prefer to spend their lives in small and less populated towns. I would definitely choose to live in a big and crowded city because I feel it suits more to my personality, my needs and serves better to my priorities and life plans.
First of all, a big city provides better health services, more advanced education and job opportunities. Young people have the chance to study at better academic institutions and universities and receive a more advanced education. Also, there are many well-known international companies providing plenty of jobs available. Thus, a financial security and building of a more successful carrier could be promised to an individual.
Furthermore, apparently, the education and job opportunities people living in big cities have more entertainment options. They can improve themselves spiritually by joining cultural events. Theatre, museums, big cinemas, and sports facilities are some of the examples that a person in a big city could use and cover its mental, cultural or training needs.
Additionally, people who live in a big city learn to become more social and flexible due to the fact that they interact with many people in their academic or work environment. They learn to be tolerant to difference since they socialize with people coming from different places and cultures. So their world perception widens and they rid of prejudgements and taboos that used to restrict their mind when they lived in a small city. Also, they learn how to handle stressful situations evaluate data and messages that bombing their mind due to fast city life rhythms. This will eventually contribute to a more complete and developed personality with a critical mind and a sharper point of view.
In conclusion, considering all things have been discussed above it could be affirmed that life in a big city is much more advantageous than in a small one where opportunities related to all fields are restricted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16616314199 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92032364238 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570996978852 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9093800233 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198595250218 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066406552231 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782144571635 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107763836346 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823937994753 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.