Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Cities as an important inhabitant for human beings experienced a big growth which made some of them unsuitable to live in. Like everything else in this world, live in the city has its pros and cons that sometimes make it difficult to make a decision about living in or out of the city. Personally, I believe living in a city have many favorable effects in people beside hazardous that could make life in a city difficult. However, it seems life in down town has many issues which make the life rough but I prefer to live somewhere out of cities. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, people started to live in cities many years age to use advantageous of being with each other that could bring safety, namouras facilities, strong communications, etc. On the other hand, modern era changed many well-being aspects of life in cities and brought problems such as air pollution, stress, crowd places, etc. which made it uneasy to be in cities for whole time of life. My personal experience is a convincing experience of this. I grew up in a small city and experienced a life that there wasn’t any stress to be late on a meeting, thus, when I moved to a modern big city as a university student situation has become deeply different. Air pollution made me sick for along time which I couldn’t recognize the reason of my sickness, also, hair drop revealed that may was an effect of stress for being in such a place.
Secondly, as aforementioned in this text living in down town has its problems, however, there are also many positive points about that. A recent research clarified that the sense of successfulness in the people who are living out of big cities is more reachable. Explanation for this fact is the low rate of competition to gain opportunities in small size cities and down towns. For instance, when I was student of my homeland school there was a great feeling of honor in me because of obtaining good grades between other students. Therefore, move to a famous university in a big city made a complete orientation in feelings about myself. I felt depressed and shame after one semester for the grades that I gained. Now, I suppose it wasn’t my flaw but the situation.
In conclusion, in my view life in a small city is more compatible with features of humankind. This is because less feeling of stress and competition in this kind of places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, i suppose, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66433566434 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75717869013 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508158508159 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7263078707 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.05 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195663150925 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583961330738 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583023229507 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113647459716 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079730665153 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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