Some people prefer to live in small town others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live?
There are two types of people in the society and some of them like to spend their life in urban areas whereas some like to be in rural areas for some reasons. To be specific, it is dependent according to the peoples' priority for the essentials in their life. Though human beings may focus on materialistic and luxurious lifestyle, but personally, I am concurred with the idea of living in village instead of living in cities. I firmly believe that we can fulfill our needs and live our life being in small area as well. I will explain these ideas in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, because of the dense area, most of the city areas are polluted and there are no open areas left for recreational activities for people. But in village, we can live our healthy life as environment is green and clean in comparison to metropolitan cities. Because of the less number of vehicle and people, air index is high in remote areas than the cities. Ultimately, it is unlikely to have disease like asthma, lung cancers and other respiratory illness in the society. I have to admit that my own opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. About five years, when I was living in capital city of my country, because of the industrialization and vehicles, it was fifth polluted city of the world. Most of the people were having lung infection. In the same way, I had a serious issue on my heart when I examined my health condition. As a result, doctor suggested me to live in a place with clean environment.
Secondly, most of the people are facing unemployment in modern cities because of the population growth which is causing depression and frustration in human beings. Not only this, it is believed that the number of rubbery, murder, rape cases are increasing day by day than before. So, people do not find safe to travel wherever they like in crowded place like California, New York. But in small community, people can find job as population is already very low. Fortunate to say, people have harmonious and healthy relationship with each other because of which rare crime case can be happened.
Finally, other benefit of staying in rural area is people do not get viral disease in small community. They have less interaction and physical distance with each other and they are not supposed to have it. For example, Covid 19 is spreading in the big cities and effecting the economic sector and life of people from big cities who have hardship to stay in social distance.
To light of the above mentioned reasons, I totally prefer to live my life in small community and have healthy lifestyle without distraction from any environmental and sound pollution. Though they may have some advantages in living in big cities but it is more convenient to stay in a small city to for our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...cific, it is dependent according to the peoples priority for the essentials in their li...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as for, for example, as a result, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71659919028 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6551976535 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497975708502 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9351267332 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273737890042 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694832831267 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596742365808 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155159089815 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643866204135 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.