Some people prefer to live in a small town Others prefer to live in a big city Which place would you prefer to live in Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Although some people may prefer to live in big towns due to factors like high social life and high commercial activities that take place in the big cities. Job opportunities and the standard of living also seem to be generally higher in these cities. Nonetheless, I prefer to live a small town due to the following reasons.
First, the atmosphere in a town tends to be more tranquil than that of a bigger city. The crime rate seem is also minimal, in a general sense, compare to that of the bigger cities. I currently live in Ota, a town close to Lagos. The socio cultural status of the people in both places is the same. That said, the crime rate in Lagos is by far higher than that of Ota. The atmosphere of Lagos is also more intense, people rushing from one place to the other, very long traffics and loud noise coming from the speakers of people advertising their products. People leave their house for their respective workplaces as early as 4am so as to beat the traffic and get to their place of work early. This “humpy-bumpy” lifestyle that pervades big cities is a major deciding factor for my preference for smaller towns. Who doesn’t want a nice and tranquil existence?
Second, as a result of the rule of demand and supply in economics, the big cities tend to suffer from high inflation rate due to higher demands. Therefore, it is cheaper to live in towns. The house rents in a big city like Kano or Lagos in Nigeria is generally much higher than that of a small town like Bida. This is the same for other basic amenities and products. Because of this, people tend to spend more, and save less, in larger cities; not only in Nigeria but all over the world. So, I believe it is better to live in a small town in other to save and plan better for the future.
In a nutshell, I prefer to live in smaller towns because it is more tranquil in these towns, and the cost of living is much lower; thereby giving the opportunity to save more.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 627, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...r respective workplaces as early as 4am so as to beat the traffic and get to their place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, as to, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42659279778 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41242909765 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468144044321 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5181727483 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1052631579 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3178370253 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982140045542 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914111215944 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223637621987 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772803682593 0.0645574589148 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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