Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
Not everybody is rich and not everybody can afford basic needs which is necessary for peoples to live. Some people believe that giving something to people who is in need is wrong. They think after giving money to people, they become dependent on others and it is waste of money. However, I believe that giving money to people is the right thing to do particularly for beggars to ask money on street roads.
People do not choose to become a poor or beggar. They born with this situation and it is not their fault. Because of poverty they do not get education and it is very problematic for them as they can not find job. They need to ask for money on roads to get some foods. They want education, proper job and everything that other people dreams about but their financial condition stops them from education. For example, when I working with NGO, we had a project of surveying poor and beggars. I met many beggars and listen their side of story and understand that they want everything but because they do not have food, they have to ask money on streets to get some food at the end of a day. And it is not possible for them or their children to go to school for education. So, it is good to give money to people who is in need so they can get some food.
In addition, if we give them small amount of money they can do many things. Their needs are food and small job that give money to them on daily basis. If we provide money to street beggars, then they get some food and then buy some toys and sell to other people. So it becomes their daily income and it decreased country's poverty. For example, I find many beggars who started their business of toys. They sell their toys in traffic. People buy their toys and give money and they earn significant amount of money to get some food and earn money. And it it good for them. They get something to do and they did it perfectly. So, small contribution to poor can make significant change.
Moreover, sometimes people do not believe on beggars. Sometimes contractors send poor people to ask money and they do not give money to beggars. Sometimes, they faked about their injury and do wrong things. They send their children to ask money and do not give food to their children. So instead of giving money, people should also give food or clothes to them. Sometimes it is embarrassing to see woman without clothes or half clothes, in a heat, asking for money to buy food. So, instead of money, everybody should also give clothes as well as food.
In conclusion, there are some disadvantages of giving money to beggars but small amount of money will make significant difference in society. They get food, money and do small business so they do not need to ask money again. They smile and live happily with only small contribution and everybody should give money to poor and beggars as well.
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...ey to get some food and earn money. And it it good for them. They get something to do...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46641074856 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30167091491 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.353166986564 0.524837075471 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0929696347 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5151515152 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7878787879 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06060606061 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356952974087 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123877850968 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917958409062 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275303593451 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912165141181 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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