Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?

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Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?

The topic raises a controversial issue of whether it is right to give money to a beggar. Indisputably, we should give them money for the sake of humanity. But, this will encourage them to take money from people without working. Thus I generally disagree with the opinion that money should be given to beggars because of three reasons.

Firstly, if they get money freely they will not work. For instance, any beggar who just sits all-day outside any temple or railway station for money. And people giving them money will encourage him not to work and instead beg of money. This will have an adverse effect on society.

Secondly, if they do not work they will not understand the importance of money. For example, if any person earns anything with hard work he/she will always respect that hard earn thing. If they get money for free they will spend it without any second thought.

Furthermore, nowadays begging on the street has become business. There are many begging mafias which by force and without a will of person are forced to beg and by giving them money, we are implicitly supporting these illegal activities.

In conclusion, I would suggest that instead of giving them money people should give them food or any other essential goods. So that use them and they couldn't use the money for bad things.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80176211454 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33922778889 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563876651982 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9110551961 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253504914869 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981062988692 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519971278407 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150357245603 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448610067725 0.0645574589148 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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