Staying in one place or moving in search of another place?
Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of staying at one place or moving from one place to another in search of better living conditions. if I were forced to choose, I strongly believe that people should be ready to migrate from one place to another, if they believe that the new place will allow them to lead a better life. I am firm in my belief of supporting this view due to several reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, most people migrate from one place to another in search of a better job. A good paying job ensures that a person can live comfortably and provide a better standard of life for his family. It also ensures that the family is well-fed and they are allowed to live their life on their own terms without being dependent on others. I have to admit that my opinion is strongly influenced by my own personal experiences. my uncle, who worked as a software engineer in a small startup compnay in india, wasn't very well paid and no other benefits were given to him by his company. Moreover, he had to repay several eduaction loans and look after his family, which included his wife and two kids. he decided to shift to saudi arabia, where he got a better paying job than his previous stint in india. In his new job, he was paid thrice the salary he got in his previous job, and thus, was able to live a better life in saudi arabia as compared to india. he was now able to repay all the loans he had previously taken and was able to send his kids to world-class private schools in saudi arabia. if my uncle had not moved from india, he would have never realised his true potential and would have had to lead a poor life in india.
Secondly, people move out of their current city or village in order to find a better neighborhood, which is safer and consists of a better community. Some people living in shady neighborhoods, are usually frightened by the various crimes and violence which takes place near their homes. thus, they decide to move out in search of a safer neighborhood. take for example, one of my cousins who lived in a small village in Uttar Pradesh, india. The village they lived in, was very famous for gangsters and filled with crimes and violence on a regular basis. hence, their family, frightened by the violence, decided to move to Delhi, which is a metropolitan city. Once they moved out of their village, they were living their life without the constant worry of losing their lives and hence, were able to live a more peaceful life in the city. if my cousin's family, had not moved out of their village, they would have lived their life with the constant tension and frightend by the fear of danger to their lives.
In conclusion, though, many people are of the opinion that people should stay at one place during their entire life, I firmly being that people should migrate from one place to another if there is an opportunity for better standards of living and will allow them to lead peaceful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2487.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51361161525 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31974867651 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431941923775 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 795.6 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1813608903 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.045454545 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0454545455 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353416949252 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112421285468 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101779309088 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252439514902 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734421820585 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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