Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
It’s said that to be meticulous is to attain a half-success. Hence, people always disagree that successful people try new and risky things. However, it’s unreasonable at all, and in fact the things that can be well done benefit less than the risky thing, but novelty things do. In some degrees, they only do the perfect thing to avoid from making mistaks. However, this also blocks them in a comfort zone, which they can not improve themselves anymore. Maybe it’s a safe method, but it can not sustain for a long time for one can not block himself in the comfort zone. Contrarily, persons daring to try the new things, whatever the result it is, always get benefits. One person can obtain successful experience or lesson by failure, both of which are precious for one’s growth. Progress with risk enhance the person’s ability, and finally make the succeed. Actually, in general, the vast majority of people are not willing to take the adventure for a novel things, which are usually a highly significant. Once these valuable things are done by the brave and talented person, so it’s no doubt that this person would obtain numerous repute and wealth. Those persons are therefore of higher probability to success and be well-known. More importantly, achievement brings passions and confidence, which are crucial as one’s activation and motivate one to go through successively devoting for another peek of success. Thereby, when we see a successful guy, mostly this guy is filled with passion and energy for the next adventure, whenever. Though we know trying unfamiliar is dangerous and may leads to disastrous loss. However, this threat not only will not scare and obstruct people, but also can enforce them to get through to it. Being given under badly threat and pressure of highly probability of the failure, one’s strength will be stimulated and amplified at a considerable level. Sometimes this assists a challenger deal with the unimaginably difficult problems and obtain the magnificent approach. It’s said the risk itself is not harmful at all, sometimes efficient for people with a desire becoming successful. After above discussion, we can conclude that successful people try new things and take risks since this habit has made the successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...person's ability, and finally make the succeed. Actually, in general, the vast majorit...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...lling to take the adventure for a novel things, which are usually a highly significant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in fact, in general, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17741935484 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7514855824 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5751484557 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236256214485 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732524203285 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722065660924 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236256214485 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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