tpo 28
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Developing the technology in our world needs more professional persons, As a result, it is clear that why some people claim that fathers and mothers are more worried about their children's training in compare with the past. In fact, I agree with them for 3 main reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, regarding the issue of importance of juveniles' skills for entering to job's world, one might suggest that parents awardness has been increased gradually. For example, my grand father was not an educated person and did not know much about my father's school works. It was advisbla that he never mind my father education. On contrary, not only was my father very curious about how I had done my assignment, but he also supervise the process of choosing both my major and job.
Another aspect of being worried about kid's education is various organization offering better situation for high level training. For instance, 10 years ago, when I wanted to pass entrance exam for university, there was not a lot of institutes for fulfilling my understanding of class materials. Now, they are almost in each street in my city. Thus, it is obvious that parents be more cautious in their younger' education.
Most importantly, having considered necessity of strong background of knowledge for attaining a fair career in the future, parents may assert more to involve in kid's training. To clarify, I show my point with a true story about some thing that happened to me. When I graduated from university and applied for a job in a factory. In my interview, I founded that there were numerous people such as me that be on my boss's list. Finally because of my better performance in my cources, I was selected by that company. Had not I tried much, I could not have choosed for that superior job.
In all, what drives somebody to think that parents are more worried about their children's training may fall into 3 basic categories including high awareness of parents, more scientific organization and competition in acquiring better careers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'job'.
Suggestion: job
...nce of juveniles skills for entering to jobs world, one might suggest that parents a...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'supervises'.
Suggestion: supervises
...w I had done my assignment, but he also supervise the process of choosing both my major a...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cess of choosing both my major and job. Another aspect of being worried about ki...
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Line 13, column 229, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...I show my point with a true story about some thing that happened to me. When I graduated f...
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Line 13, column 426, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...le such as me that be on my bosss list. Finally because of my better performance in my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91690544413 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69933202466 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595988538682 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7434583825 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.941176471 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131161226465 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419087973502 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589667989654 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871590699551 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441561195856 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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