TPO 39- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It's significant for people to choose a lifetime job in order to ensure they may lead a secure and successful life. Compared to old days,generally speaking, I totally agree that it is easier nowadays to identify what kind of career will lead to a successful life. I will elaborate my points in the following sections.
To begin with, there are more and more types of jobs for us to choose from. Thanks to the development of technology, many new types of careers have come to the historical stage, such as video makers, beauty bloggers, key opinion leaders, etc. During the past, there were fewer career choices for us, and young adults could easily feel confused when they are considering what area to enter after graduation simply because there may not be jobs suitable for their characteristics. Take my father for example. He was an intelligent graduate from a computer science school. But when he was looking for jobs, he couldn't find a job that was suitable for his interests, so he ended up in a finance company and he had regretted for the choice till now. If he was able to find a job suitable for him, he would be more successful. however, modern life has provided people with various possibilities. it's never too late for them to figure out the right choice.
In addition to diverse career choices, we can also get more information about job selections from different places, which can also help us achieve success. In the past, we could only acquire the information about a job from newspapers or people around us. it was hard for us to know if the job would guarantee stable incomes, health insurance, promising future or something like that. Today we can get this information without effort from various websites such as LinkedIn and Facebook. Before making a final decision, we can thoroughly conduct a survey under these job choices in order to guarantee ourselves with a secure solution.
Admittedly, it was not hard for people in the past to choose a lifetime career.Without high-end technology, life was easier to deal with and happiness was relatively easier to acquire. people could still lead a relatively good life with their jobs. However, many of those jobs are fading because of the growing standard for working and technology. For instance, more and more waiters and computer typist are being replaced by robots.
To conclude, with more job choices and more information about career choices, I strongly believe that people today are in a situation where they can identify what type of job would lead to a secure and successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8661971831 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6934499799 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528169014085 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5128238662 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.65 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225214154213 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720060796183 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573511268515 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150047108573 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368350213728 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.