TPO-41 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Teachers are the essential part of the life in a society. Everyone in this world needs a teacher so, they learn and develop new skill in a better way. However, in today's world the Teachers are more devalued then they were in the past. First, nowadays teachers are not honest to their profession. Another reason is, internet has reduce the value of a teacher.
To begin with, now a days there is no professionalism in the teachers. However, in the past teachers were more respected and valued because they were very professional and teach to the students with wholeheartedly. On the contrary, today's teachers are not honest with their profession and fulfill their duty as a burdensome work. For example, when my mother was young she used to tell me that, when they were in the high school they used to take proper classes of every subject. This is because, the teachers were very punctual and very good at teaching the courses. However, nowdays in my high school teachers usually show their presence in the class. They often do not come, because of which the students do not show in the class. My own cousin is a teacher in a government high school and he often take days off from work for no reasons. Therefore, I believe the teachers are less appericiated and valued by the society .
Additionally, the internet had reduced the value of a teacher. In the past, their was not vast access to the internet among people so, they appreciated the teachers for teaching them. However, internet has many websites where learning materials, videos and online tutorials are available from which people are learning by themselves. For instance, I prepared my English language exam by watching videos from the youtube and online English practice. These thing would not have been possible in the past. As a result, the value of teachers has been decrease and they are now less appreciated.
In conclusion, I am of opinion that the teachers are less appreciated and valued then they were in the past. This is because, now they are not true to their profession. In addition, the availability of internet in the society has put down the value of teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ofession Another reason is internet has reduce the value of a teacher To begin with...
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...the value of a teacher To begin with now a days there is no professionalism in the teac...
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Suggestion: a day; days
...value of a teacher To begin with now a days there is no professionalism in the teac...
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...n a government high school and he often take days off from work for no reasons There...
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...s appericiated and valued by the society Additionally the internet had reduced t...
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Suggestion: This thing; These things
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68108108108 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51069298301 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421621621622 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 370.0 20.1344086022 1838% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1732.0 100.406767564 1725% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 370.0 20.6045352989 1796% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 139.0 5.45110844103 2550% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286418016181 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286418016181 0.076458572812 375% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197760111995 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447586752508 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
automated_readability_index: 185.6 11.7677419355 1577% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -295.61 58.1214874552 -509% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 146.4 10.1575268817 1441% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.46 8.01818996416 305% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 10.002688172 540% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 150.0 10.0537634409 1492% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 186.0 10.247311828 1815% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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