TPO 48
Without any shadow of doubt, the youth is the cornerstone of any successful society; in fact, the more qualified the young individuals of a country is, the more powerful the country is since young people are the members of the societies to come. With this in mind, some believe that it stands to reason that due to today's complicated life, the youth should be able to plan as well as organize in an efficient manner, while others hold the opposite view. I, personally, subscribe to the first attitude based on quite a few reasons, two of the most substantial of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The most compelling reason is that in today's modern world, every company has to be in rush so as not to be left behind in contending for the "field of competition", and they work more and more in order to achieve their goals, which brings them about fortune and happiness. Given the existing economic situation and today's uncertain and highly competitive environment, companies need to be more conservative, and to evaluate their surroundings from different angles. Planning gives corporations a chance to behave in a wise manner, and to survive is such uncertain environment. As a result the youth who have the ability to plan and organize can manage their business or their companies in the manner those companies’ productivity and efficiency increase.
Another interpretation as to why I do not concur with the latter perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that if we survey famous people's life, we can understand that all of them have had careful planning in order to reach their targets. For instance, Edison who has invented electricity, which plays a pivotal in development of science, had a meticulous plan to embrace his goal. Another example to support my point is a real story that happened to me. Then years ago, even though the chance to pass the entry exam for university in my country is low, I managed to be accepted in one of the most reputable universities in my country due to the fact that I made a plan and started studying for the exam twelve years ago. On the other hand, unless young people have plan for their lives, they can neither be successful, nor enjoy peace of mind in the future, owing to the fact that they do not know how they should behave in order to reach their goals; hence, they are continually worried. As a result, planning paves the way for not only the youth to reach their targets easier, but also societies to develop.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned arguments discussed above, I firmly endorse my point of view that the ability to plan and organizing brings community about prosperity in general due to enjoying competent individuals and helps young people to be more successful in the future in particular.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...uld be able to plan as well as organize in an efficient manner, while others hold the opposite view. I...
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Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wise manner" with adverb for "wise"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g gives corporations a chance to behave in a wise manner, and to survive is such uncertain envir...
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Line 3, column 784, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...he other hand, unless young people have plan for their lives, they can neither be su...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'in general', 'in particular', 'in summary', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222014925373 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.149253731343 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0839552238806 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0503731343284 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0541044776119 0.0685040099705 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126865671642 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0317164179104 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84625938886 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0522388059701 0.0309702414327 169% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100746268657 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00932835820896 0.0209618222197 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167910447761 0.0139019557991 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2815.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 481.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85239085239 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330561330561 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241164241164 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172557172557 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122661122661 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84625938886 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515592515593 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 60.6126756476 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 34.3571428571 20.5533526081 167% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2612683535 48.84282405 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.071428571 120.699889404 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3571428571 20.5533526081 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 0.644075263715 200% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 58.4735669736 45.7405998639 128% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120430220716 0.103427244359 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0577547918935 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.624062877183 0.497263757937 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174571593001 0.151897553556 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.447649037265 0.336927656856 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0545228292349 0.067059652881 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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