TPO 48. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Through the time, the communities become more complicated because of the quick progress of technology and science. These changes have made some changes between the behavior of the community members. In my of thinking, nowadays young people should be able to plan and organize in order to succeed in the complicated modern life because not only is there a heavy burden on their shoulder, but also they should use the time more efficiently.
The first reason which should be stated here is that today the job positions require more work. The science and technology is improving quickly. The job opportunities almost need people with high knowledge to handle their works, so people should spend a significant time of their life for education in the universities and getting the needed talents for the specific job. After that, they have too many years in the career to attain enough experiences in that to be an expert and up to date because persistently the technology is progressing and they should be aware to new devices and its applications. Therefore, they should try very hard, and it can be achieved by planning for the future. without a plan, the youth will not be able to handle this heavy works.
The other point which deserves some words here is that youth have to save their time today. The world population is growing and there is high competition among the individuals. The person who works faster and is able to do various jobs in a short time will be successful. So, it is important to use the time more efficiently, and it is possible by planing. People with the ability to plan and organize, and make a schedule with a sequence of activities each of which will be done right after the previous one. In this way, the person can save their time and prevent it to be squandered, and finally can get better opportunities in their career.
To summarize, today it is crucial for people to have the ability to plan and organize. Nowadays, they should do a lot of works and activities, during and before starting their career, to be capable to handle the job. Also, as there is massive competition between society people, the youth should use their time effectively. All of these are possible by planning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce and technology is improving quickly. The job opportunities almost need people wi...
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...be achieved by planning for the future. without a plan, the youth will not be able to h...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...high competition among the individuals. The person who works faster and is able to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7890625 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63612551197 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489583333333 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9091709623 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7894736842 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168550604024 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544982432228 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731843523715 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114763600107 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144845376782 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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