tpo 48
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Developing the technology has caused that we force for using it more and more. Although, some people assert that it is not needed that all individuals be familiar for managing this complicated life, but I do not think so. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore them in the following essay.
First of all, having enough knowledge for handling developed lifestyle needs to special abilities. For instance, for on-line searching each person should have sufficient skill to work with computer and exploring tools. In similar way, some events need on-time and well-organized strategy. Consider, last year when my mother wanted to get money by her credited card from the bank, he lost much amount of money. If she had planed for attention to certain time devoted for this simple action, she would have performed her desired work.
In addition, shortage of time for doing particular staffs has made us more organized. For example, my apartment is at 16th floor, when I want use elevator, if I do not be aware for entering and exiting in a limited time devoted to that, I can not get advantage of this technology. It would perhaps, I force go ahead through stirs or even worth, I damage myself!
Last, our intricate society make us to do our work in a certain way. As a result it is not possible to do them in our desired way. I will show this point with a true story about something that happened to me. 2 years ago, when I wanted to register for my university, we should do it in a specific time through on-line process. I did mistake and miss the time by sending my documents through postal address. Had I learn more about that crucial process, I could have been educated now!
In all, what drives somebody to claim that characteristic of appropriate management is crucial for our today life may perhaps fall in to 3 basic categories including emergency for attention to time, understanding shortage of time for special activities,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ake us to do our work in a certain way. As a result it is not possible to do them ...
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Line 13, column 414, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[4]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...documents through postal address. Had I learn more about that crucial process, I coul...
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Line 17, column 115, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'perhaps'.
Suggestion: may; perhaps
...anagement is crucial for our today life may perhaps fall in to 3 basic categories including...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75953079179 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66125114082 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604105571848 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0594679889 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4375 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129982472192 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446900517045 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418347722668 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818932197451 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331472901308 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.