TPO-50
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
history is one of the subjects that may be boring for some people and many students try to escape from learning it. they might find it ineffectual in their major and future career so they demand to substitute it with other courses. However, in my point of view history knowledge is integral for everybody and all the students should have knowledge in this field mainly because of the following reasons.
First and foremost, knowledge about history is part of general knowledge that everyone should know. they should know not only about the history of their own homeland but also about others'. it is in some terms similar to the importance of learning basic mathematics for everyone. some may never use mathematical operations beyond summation in their life but everyone must know the basics about math in case sometimes it may be needed. history knowledge is the same; it may be needed in a different part of our life such as visiting a historic site, tending to attract a tourist to visit our country, etc.
Secondly, the history of the land has an influence on the culture and beliefs of its people. Thus, the history of our country affects our today's lives. A man can look into history to see the origins of cultural problems and try to solve them. also, many frays between countries originate from their wars and conflicts in the past. To understand the source of political actions in our country we should know about its history. Moreover, even the traditions in our own family may be connected to historic events. so history has a major role in our modern life and we should be aware of that to come up with solutions to today's problems.
Additionally, history is a treasure of experiences of people who live before us. we can learn from them to deal with the problems we face in our modern life. To make my point clear, remember the effect of religion pressure during the mid-time in Europe which led to Ronessans. we can learn from this experience that politics should be separated from religion and religion should be optional for people without any pressure from the government. Otherwise, it will make dissatisfaction between people with different ideas which might cause rebellions in our country.
All in all, from what I have discussed above, knowledge in history is essential for future generations who will control and manage our country's future. it will make help them make wiser decisions for the country and lead the country to prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9028436019 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56431500834 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497630331754 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9269892822 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0454545455 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144084887265 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446070457382 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325717548919 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875518538959 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325311139705 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.