TPO 57: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Stress management is an inevitable thing in the modern industrialized society. Bringing mental and physical difficulties, stress level should be diminished as much as possible in our lives. There's a long debate between psychologists which being alone is beneficial to reducing stress or people should hang out and socialize with others when they get nervous. This essay will discuss why it is in fact important to be alone when someone wants to reduce the stress level.
The first reason to be mentioned is that people can think deeply about the possible solutions for their stress-making problems when they are alone. Being alone, people can consider all aspects of the problem and as a result, they will finally solve it. Not to mention they will feel more relaxed in this way. As a case in point, when a problem comes up, I cannot concentrate on it and feel relaxed when I socialized with my friends. Precisely, not having leisure time to contemplate and find an answer to the problem increases my stress level. In succinct, being solitude for a while helps people pay attention to the source of stress and eliminate it.
The other exquisite reason is that individual sports like walking, hiking, and so forth, help people feel truly relaxed and make better decisions. When people get nervous, listening to music besides exercising helps them forget their problems. One of the very recent research done by Harvard psychology students revealed that exercising as well as playing music are the best ways to reduce one's stress. This relaxation method keeps people away from their difficulties and helps them to make a better decision. I have a compelling example in this vein, about two years ago, I was located in a deep depression because of all stresses I had during getting my master. My psychologist told me to exercise individually in a gym on a regular basis in addition to playing music. As a result, I forgot my difficulties by exercising. After leaving the gym, I had a fresh mind to think about my stressful problems and make brilliant decisions. By being alone, people can do whatever they want like exercising and listening to music which help them reduce their stress level.
This essay discussed how being alone will help people to reduce their stress by means of doing individual sports and listening to music in addition to thinking deeply about their problems and find the exact solution for them. In conclusion, when it comes to reducing stress level, loneliness is much more beneficial than spending time in public and between friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95581395349 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65859932136 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502325581395 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8940520883 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.476190476 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4761904762 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157918427032 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518754444178 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353693892633 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108686599953 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127921755044 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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