TPO 65: Nowadays many high schools and universities require students to work on projects in groups, and all members of the group receive the same grade (mark) on the project. Do you agree or disagree that giving every member of a group the same grade is a good way to evaluate students?
Notwithstanding some people think receiving equivalent grades is the best approach in group projects, I am of the conviction that this attitude is not an efficient assessment of the students. I feel this way due to a couple of reasons that I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I think in this situation, gained grades will not be fair, since not all the students in a group do the same job and put equal effort to solve the problems, so some of the members may get a free ride. I should admit that my opinion on this matter is influenced by my personal experiences. When I was involved in a group project at the end of my last semester at university, I had a classmate that was on our team. We all were under noticeable pressure because of other exams and projects that we had. I try to work hard on this particular project while my coworker never participated enough in doing it. She preferred to study more on other courses and gave me loads of unconvincing excuses to not help. As a result, even though we got a top grade on our project, I felt that is not fair for me if we have the same grades while in fact, I did our assignment alone.
Moreover, giving the whole members a similar mark may discourage students to devote time and energy to do the task in the best way because everyone thinks that other members are responsible too and they will give the right solution and response to tasks. I mean, the individuals do not feel the responsibility and the burden of the project as enough as it motivates them to work. For example, my roommate at the dormitory had a group project but she did not have an incentive to work on it, every time I told her that she ought to start doing their duties, she said that she is waiting for other members to begin the project since they all would receive same grades. Eventually, they finished their task at the last minute with lots of shortages. Hence, all get a low grade, while each of them was top students, so this same grading caused that their mark did not evaluate their knowledge accurately.
To sum up, I believe that giving various grades to each person in teamwork is a much better idea. This is because justice and encourage students to show all their abilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... equal effort to solve the problems, so some of the members may get a free ride. I should a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, i feel, i mean, i think, in fact, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46359223301 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57472337214 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507281553398 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5644050845 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.9375 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307710971765 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863112918149 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641188407924 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168088770392 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793722075807 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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