TPO5
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
In today’s world people are encouraged to follow their heart, seek out their passion and live their lives on their own terms. while all this might seem encouraging, there also exist hypocritic people who encourage this lifestyle in speech but never in action. there are no shortage of opinions as well in this regard. while many people might disagree with me, I firmly believe that, in the midst of all this chaos people in the modern society end up focus on personal enjoyment culminating in doing things that they like rather than doing things they should rather do. I must admit that this opinion stems from my personal experience rather than a measured consensus of the society.
For instance, I love watching football matches. I am an ardent fan of “Arsenal football Club”, a soccer club based in London. they play soccer matches every week and it is telecasted live on TV. I can watch them whenever I wish to and I regularly watch them play every Saturday. however, when my exams are round the corner, my parents have advised me countless times to stop watching football and spend that time studying for the exams. while, I know deep in my heart, that I should be following their advice and studying for the exams, I invariably don’t. I still watch those matches and end up procrastinating my study period. this is a classic example of me doing something for my personal enjoyment rather than doing what I should be doing.
Furthermore, this is evident in the lives of corporate employees like mine. I’ve personally chosen personal enjoyment over the work that I should have been doing. many a times, when my girlfriend calls me to go out for dinner, I do leave my work behind and go out with her for dinner. I do come back and finish the work later, but that seldom happens only when I have the time and energy left to complete the same. I would any day prefer going out with her over finishing my work. Here again, the right thing to do would be to complete my work and then go out for dinner, however, I still gout for dinner first as that satisfies my personal self.
Another good example in today’s society would be that of drinking alcohol or even smoking cigarettes. All of us have known for quite some time that both of these activities are injurious to our health. they are also deleterious to our kith and kin as the smoke from cigar’s can harm their respiratory process. this has also been broadcasted by the government countless times to make the public aware of the same. Nevertheless, we ignore all these warnings and continue to smoke our lungs out and drink a lot. this once again proves that we prefer personal enjoyment over doing the right thing.
In light of all these examples, I could confidently say that we millennials prefer our personal satisfaction and enjoyment over anything else. And I agree with that attitude, for we only do our best work when we are happy and content. only then, does the creativity in us flow and we live as we are supposed to be enjoying the only life we have rather than slaving away.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...est work when we are happy and content. only then, does the creativity in us flow an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2561.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70772058824 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54349530704 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487132352941 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.858726927 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4642857143 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292522946759 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743900584925 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111754084222 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164251031199 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634723623744 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.