In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Generaly we always like to thinking about the future and this think gives us mental satisfaction. Personally, I beliee that in future years people use less cars than today. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, people are aware of environmental protection. Every human beings want to live a better life within a healthy atmosphere and quite place that gives a very cool ambience. My own expereince is a compelling example of this. I live in large city in Bangladesh. In my home city 10 years ago there were many cars presents in the roads and there were many many car's shop established within my city. Roads were always congestion because of transportation especially of cars. Almost every family were a car. Additionaly,the environment of my city was very bad and always smoke fly around there. Then an environment group raise the topic about the deterior air quality and manyeoples support that group. As a result today, there are very few cars in my city and air quality is far better and I thik after twwenty years the will be ver few cars drives in my city.
Finally, cars replaced by alternative transport system. Cars are carrying just a couple of people and seat capacity is quite limited. People needs large transport system that carry a large number of people at a time. For example, if fifty peoples need fifty cars to carry them then road will be always busy and people are not going to their destination quickly. People want to go quickly and then that people need a large vheicles that carry fifty people at a time and reached their working places very fast. Additionally, when individuals are journey all together they are communicate to each other and increasing ther relationship, knowing each other, gossip about national topics. These benefites are very much like to peoples and always desired to be a socialized within their country;s people, That;s why I think public transports will be increasing inthe next twenty years and number of cars will be decrease drastically.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that number of cars will be reduce within the next twenty years period. This is because awareness among the peoples about environmental issues and individuals always like to large transport system rather than limited seats capacity within the cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... beliee that in future years people use less cars than today. I feel this way for tw...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: many
...rs presents in the roads and there were many many cars shop established within my city. R...
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ost every family were a car. Additionaly,the environment of my city was very bad and...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...needs large transport system that carry a large number of people at a time. For example, if fifty...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n quickly. People want to go quickly and then that people need a large vheicles t...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'communicated'.
Suggestion: communicated
...duals are journey all together they are communicate to each other and increasing ther relat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90656565657 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62867386395 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517676767677 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4692397907 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3181818182 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279733070078 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794353700051 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109610268478 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181119312073 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273081616749 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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