What are the characteristics of being a good parent?
Today, some parents are too concerned about raising “project kids” which refers to children whose parents want to canalize the children to specific jobs, only for the sake of their name and reputation. Some parents do not promote the development of children both mentally and physically and some of them are not even aware of their responsibilities at all. Then what are the criteria to be considered as a good parent? I personally believe that there are three most essential characteristics of a good parent.
Firstly and most importantly, a parent must be affectionate and loving. From the moment we come to the world crying, we seek our parents’ love. If a parent fails to give enough love that a child requires, this would cause irreversible psychological results for the child. Because people who were raised without love are more likely to grow their own children with the same lack of love. This loop leads to many individuals who are not at peace with themselves. Consequently, more problematic individuals create a more problematic society.
Secondly, one of the most crucial features of a good parent is being a good role model for the children. Parents must first themselves put into practice the behavior and values that they hope their children will develop since their actions will speak louder than their words. For instance, using eco-friendly products and protecting the environment is more powerful than just warning the children about not throwing the garbage on the ground. Being a
good model for children also requires treating others with kindness and respect which will encourage the children to act the same way.
Thirdly, good parents must certainly support their children about their preferences in life rather than forcing them to choose certain things. Parents usually foster their children to accomplish so many things at the same time. They hire special instructors and pay huge amounts of money for the lessons that maybe their children are not interested in. However, you cannot make an artist out of your child if he is not interested in music or you
cannot force him to become a doctor, a lawyer, and the other jobs that you consider esteemed. Therefore, parents must allow their children to enhance in the area that they want to go forward.
In conclusion, I hold the belief that these three elements are the most important characteristics of a good parent, if we want our children to succeed in life, both personally and academically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07055961071 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74676575066 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3080128194 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.55 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297867920201 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110189463555 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132603455927 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146602464367 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102761876739 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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