The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world?"
There is no shortage of argument that how the technology influenced in the twentieth century people. Although it is not ideal for everyone, some people believe there would be negative impact on society, and other not Personally, I believe Internet explore the world without step out from the home and I could not image a day without internet. I feel this way that for two reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
First, computer networking makes people to do shopping easily. In the olden days people use to go to the shop to buy the goods. In contrast, present public is preferring online shopping because there u can select whatever u want by setting in front of the computer it save time. On the top of that, most of the websites offering saving coups that save a lot of money especially during festival sessions. For example, recently I buy a television through online and I got twenty percent discount and they deliver to my house. As a result it saves my money and time. I don’t think so it is possible without online access.
Second, Technology plays a vital role in the health care system to maintain confidentially of patient medical records. Now all the health related data sending through well designed hospital software. So, there is no chance of steeling and destroy unlike paper records. Moreover, it is easy transfer record from one location to other place safely and quickly and it is very important in health care for better and fast service especially in the emergency. For instant, recently my uncle was admitted in emergency at Omak, but he is from Findlay. Surprisingly, they transferred all his updated information from Findlay hospital very next hour. What more he got required treatment and he survived. So internet is very important even in the crucial situation.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that cyberspace involve in the every activity of our routine life. This is because it completing lot of tasks without any effort and it also protect us in the critical conditions
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'explores'.
Suggestion: explores
...ther not Personally, I believe Internet explore the world without step out from the hom...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...opping easily. In the olden days people use to go to the shop to buy the goods. In ...
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Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... the goods. In contrast, present public is preferring online shopping because there u can sel...
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Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
... by setting in front of the computer it save time. On the top of that, most of the w...
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Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o it is possible without online access. Second, Technology plays a vital role in...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'protects'?
Suggestion: protects
...of tasks without any effort and it also protect us in the critical conditions
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so protect us in the critical conditions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88662790698 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66795065959 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4312924133 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.05 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107638626702 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278052434528 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335545164459 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577508242966 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280971127338 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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