Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are different perspectives of what is true happiness of workers. Some people assert that trying many tasks are more satisfy, while others believe that doing similar tasks all day long is better for most of the workers. From my point of view, I think the answer to the question differs between different people.
On the one hand, there’s kind of people can’t stand with repeating the same tasks all the day like a machine. They believe they are able to give more to the society in various domain and only machine complete the same work day after day without any complain. I am such kind of people, when I was in high school, I got a part-time job in the local art museum as cleaner. I initially wanted to acquire a job such as tour guide because I was a natural art boy, and I thought if I do a nice cleaning work, I would get some promotion to work as a tour guide. However, I was totally wrong with that. I actually did a nice job and praised by my superior and get some increasing on my salary, but he had on intention to let me try the guide service because he though I was the best cleaner. Then the tedious cleaning drove me crazy, and I couldn’t bare to repeat the same action mechanically. Finally, I quitted and found a secretary job in a food company. Dealing with different tasks everyday made me feel that I developed my full capability.
On the other hand, there also exists some people who reluctant to solve multiple tasks in their work everyday and they would rather do the similar tasks, because they are not fond of always facing challenges and learning new stuff in their career, and doing things they are familiar with makes them more comfortable. Take my father as an example, he has been an electricity worker since he was twenty years old and still fix the same problem every day. As an individual who don’t like repeating, one day I asked him if he has ever found it’s boring to work with electricity in his thirty years career. To my surprise, he answered that every time he will feel relaxed to see the problem he has ever met before because it means that he can get the work done quickly and return his house to see his favorite TV program. Everyone has his own opinion about a choice, all we need to do is being respect to them and keep to insist our own thoughts.
In conclusion, whether people more likely to work with some different tasks than to deal same problem every day? We can easily conclude the answer is that it differs from different people based on above statements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, so, still, then, while, as to, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48275862069 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43954855378 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521551724138 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3054204018 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.473684211 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4210526316 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229213003749 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681057332601 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707651405028 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160327731254 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500058849373 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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