You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
According to the famous adage, 'you should not work for the money, make the money work for you', it is important to make wise financial decisions that will generate great profits. If i had to choose between purchasing a house or a business, i would definitely choose the option of business. It is my firm belief that a good business decision can increase the cash inflow and security, rather than a house, which just provides a roof to live under, because of the following three reasons.
To begin with, good business investment can provide profit money with which we could purchase a better house later on, but a static investment on a house is a dead end. Drawing from my own experience, nearby a highway there were two plots for sale. My neighbor and I decided to purchase one each since they were of low cost. My neighbor constructed a beautiful house that overlooked the green pastures around the highway and I decided to invest in construction of a petrol bank with the additional seed money I had. Five years later, the petrol bank was a huge success, since there were none available within 10 mile radius and with this profit I could build a beautiful home nearby my favorite beach. While the neighbor rarely used his highway home and made zero profit from it. This showed me that, investing in a business is a much better choice than a house.
Secondly, house can secure a shelter temporarily whereas a good business investment will secure the future. For example, during natural calamities like thunderstorm and earthquakes, houses are bound to be damaged causing extra repair money. But if the same money was invested in purchasing a business, then we need not worry about maintenance costs as much. Business can be self sufficient and self managing. A prudent business choice can provide for the future generations as well.
However, one might argue that house is a secure, less risky decision and business is filled with risk and uncertainties. But isn't life about the risk ? Risk is what makes our quotidian humdrum affairs interesting. Furthermore, a sagacious business choice after weighing out the pros and cons can guarantee success despite the heavy risk. A house maybe a secure decision but its a dead end, offering nothing more than a shelter to live in, in fact, it could demand further maintenance money which is highly unnecessary.
In the light of above mentioned reasons, I would strongly choose to purchase a business over a house, when I have enough money for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84345794393 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61871902258 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553738317757 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9085406803 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.380952381 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239741819318 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654613746712 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587896037066 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149060457962 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582499172574 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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