Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
That, in today ̓s world with its galloping growth of population, young generations going too increased. By increasing in young population, one of the important issues rising is about their influence on the future of society which is a matter of debate, a controversial one. Whereas, some are of the opinion that younger people have no impact on decisions have been making about society, I am, to a great extent, of the belief that young people as creators of the future, have a crucial influence due to the fact that they are more physically and mentally potent than elders and also by the same token, they are brave and very creative.
To commence, one of the compelling reasons that justify the thesis is that young people are more powerful physically and also mentally. To put in general words, they can invest more energy in the projects both due to the fact that they have intensive motivation for creating a better society and are potent enough to do that. Simply stated, elders need to rest more after years of providing services and should give this situation to others who have the ability to manage and exploit it in a better way. No one can ignore the fact that in regard to the increment of the young population if elders do not provide the opportunity for social involvement of Youngers, they will encounter with a lot of problems in the future which will be detrimental for whole society. Therefore, it is helpful for society to give a chance to the young population because they have more energy and can do the best.
Alongside with the first reason elaborated above creativeness and brave that young minds asset is another point which requires meticulous attention. Broadly speaking, we all cognizant that one of the key elements of flourishment of modern societies is exploiting of creative minds which can be found among young. To clarify, novel ideas invariably come from young and because they are curious and do not fear of taking risks then it is acceptable to give them opportunities to express their unique ideas as it works in well-developed countries. It is all transparent that young people have more knowledge of technology advancement and all progress happening all around of the world, thereafter, they can utilize a similar strategy to convert society into a better one.
Drawing upon the reasons, no one could turn a blind eye to the cardinal role of the young generation in the fate of society. Lots of opportunities should be provided for them to take part in society because of their potential physical and mental ability and also possessing a creative mind with being brave.
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Suggestion: minds'; mind's
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, broadly speaking, in general, in regard to, by the same token, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86800894855 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67270497831 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503355704698 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6635326052 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.428571429 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9285714286 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28337269354 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928789597817 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596126640044 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173265690083 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101958568277 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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