Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I do agree with the fact that students can learn much more effectively if provided an opportunity to unleash their skills as a team. this will gradually improve the widerness and in-depth understanding of a scholar in his area of interest. The potential benefit will be huge since they first split up their tasks. Making folks work together helps them explore each other's topics and teach his batch or project mate with the study of his own section.
From the delivery perspective, while doing as a team there will be continuous support from teammates for the project completion and to integrate the pieces together. In some cases, this works the other way. one person from a group takes the lead and presents the research done by other guys. To eliminate such stuff, the demonstration must be periodic, one person will not present two consecutive days.
Firstly, a learner will analyze the in-depth functionalities of his designated topic because he will end up in narrating the same to other people which very well assists him in recalling the facts he explored and projecting his collection of information in a much sensible way. Another major advantage gained while operating unitedly is, the individual need not to concentrate too much on many topics which will lead to uncertain knowledge in over all.
The second important fact is the credit. The claim of his explorations are always valuable only if documented in a larger mass which will be achieved only in collaborating the group projects and compiling them to a single entity. On a whole, over a period of time all the members of the project batch will be benefitted in some ways and they continue to possess some credit in the over all mark that they get.
Entire world is running because of team work. For example, in a football game, a single player cannot break all odds against his opponent team and score a goal. All he need is a team.The same concept applied here too .In education system, there are many examples of succession achieved being a team. The count of team members doesn't matter. It can be five or ten. A human always thinks and completes his task in a comfortable way when he is aware that he is backed up by couple of people which is collectively a team
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1373.03311258 135% => OK
No of words: 390.0 270.72406181 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63878545768 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 145.348785872 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8455112555 49.2860985944 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8421052632 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134966584276 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404695610109 0.0996497079465 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491899656015 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750908333478 0.162205337803 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421616271012 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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