possible solutions for preventing tree from declining
The passage asserts that there are three possible solotions for Torreya taxifoha, en evergreen tree, from decline. The lecturer, repudiates these ways and says that provided solutions for saving Torreya is not satisfactory and provided three reasons of support.
First, the article claims that providing a suitable microclimate like that in Florida is suitable way for saving Torreya. The professor, on the contrary, disavows this point by saying that the climate of region will be affected by large climate of near areas. Since Florida climate is drier, condition for growing Torreya should be like area where it is originated.
Second, a forther way to keep Torreya from decline is to relocate it to another region, according to the article. The lecturer disapproves this idea by providing an example about other tree which was located to new environment. She states that transforming the tree to another region has some unpredicted outcomes to native plants and trees.
Third, the reading imparts that scientific centers are able to save Torreya from declining. The professor rebuts this point by explaining that centers no longer are able to control diseases on trees, since they have no enough capbabilities to keep them away from decline.
is suitable way
is a suitable way
condition for growing Torreya should be like area where it is originated.
conditions for growing Torreya should be like an area where it is originated.
about other tree which was located to new environment
about other trees which were located to new environments
about another tree which was located to a new environment
since they have no enough capbabilities
since they have not enough capabilities
Sentence: The passage asserts that there are three possible solotions for Torreya taxifoha, en evergreen tree, from decline.
Error: solotions Suggestion: solutions
Sentence: Second, a forther way to keep Torreya from decline is to relocate it to another region, according to the article.
Error: forther Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: She states that transforming the tree to another region has some unpredicted outcomes to native plants and trees.
Error: unpredicted Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The professor rebuts this point by explaining that centers no longer are able to control diseases on trees, since they have no enough capbabilities to keep them away from decline.
Error: capbabilities Suggestion: capabilities
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2 //you have issues on articles: a/an the
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 199 250
No. of Characters: 1022 1200
No. of Different Words: 118 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.136 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.573 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.277 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.377 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.66 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4