TPO 01 Integrated Writing

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TPO 01 Integrated Writing

new Roman",serif">Recently, there has been a ton of debate as to the four day work week in the United states. More specifically, in response to the reading, the writer points out that a policy about four day workweek with less payment will benefit the company as a whole. In the listening, however, the speaker is quick to point there are several flaws in the authors claim. In fact, the professor believes that it would bring more difficulties than good to the company, and addresses, in detail, the trouble each point made in the reading text.

new Roman",serif"> First and foremost, the writer in the reading passage states that the employees would be more rested and relaxed if they work on four days in a week which will make them more conscious about their work resulting in less error. The professor, however, explains that this will be added as an extra requirement to recruit new worker to produce same amount of work output. He goes on to say that more money will be required for the training and providing health facilities to the workers added with extra space and computers.

new Roman",serif"> Secondly, one group of scholars, represented by the author, think that this new policy will reduce unemployment. The professor, on the other hand, stand in firm opposition to this claim. According to the professor, the policy may raise the expectation of the company to produce same amount of output from the employees within this four day as it is expected to increase their efficiency resulting in no increase in job scope.

new Roman",serif"> Finally, the writer wraps his claim positing that four day workweek will be good for individual employee as they will have more free time to spend with their family. Not surprisingly, the speaker takes issue with this claim by contending that more free time will hamper their career growth since five day workweek employees are in position for consistent supervising.

new Roman",serif"> To sum up, both the author and writer have conflicting views about the four day workweek idea. it is clear that they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue. new Roman",serif">

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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new Roman',serif'>Recently, there has been a ton of deba...
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...points out that a policy about four day workweek with less payment will benefit the comp...
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...le finding common ground on this issue. new Roman',serif'>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1373.03311258 135% => OK
No of words: 359.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15320334262 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63501531407 2.5805825403 141% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493036211699 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 419.366225166 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8428211779 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.142857143 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330470971249 0.272083759551 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112271476 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932897695402 0.0662205650399 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197790317677 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900264231283 0.0443174109184 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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