in a cashless society, people use more credit cards. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

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in a cashless society, people use more credit cards. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

One of the most discussed issues today relates to how often people use credit card in this advance technology we have. In this essay I will pin point some of the advantages and disadvantages of frequent usage of credits cards.

There are several reasons why we used credit cards. Firstly, it is easy and readily available anytime we need it. Second, we don't need to withdraw money if we want to buy something and it is easy to bring the card instead of bringing along the cash.

On the other hand, using the credit card has also a disadvantages in a way that we can just buy anything we want or need without limitations and would lead us to high debt in the future. Even though, we will pay it monthly but still the pay would higher and we don't have any limitations to ourselves.

Overall, we must used our credit cards wisely and use it according to our limitations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 1207.87684729 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 242.827586207 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49375 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47562334322 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 139.433497537 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 379.143842365 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3978263648 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194314509002 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106110431193 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09475773205 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139066686392 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973755471536 0.0609392437508 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.5310837438 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 55.0591133005 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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