It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.Discuss
A gap between finishing school and joining university has become a trend these days as some of the universities adopting this kind of process. Providing a year off to students after finishing school is a debatable topic in recent time. Some universities are allowing students to take a gap of even a year after they finish up school. I will elaborate on the opinions of people who believe that this process should be adopted while others are against it.
Some people who are in favor of that students should be given a year off before joining the university, provide a valid point by saying that student should get time to rejuvenate themselves before getting into the totally different environment. They must be given time to prepare themselves and adapt universities culture which can be a great benefit for them in long run. By getting this gap, students can learn about the culture and many other things so that they would not feel uncomfortable after joining the university.
On the other hand, there are some people who think that the student should not be given a gap after finishing schools as they can get involved in some bad habits and activities. They may indulge themselves in some serious crimes also as they have much free time to do all these things. In addition to this, students can become so lethargic and can lose the rhythm of studies if they get that much gap which will lead to losing their interest in studies.
In conclusion, taking a long gap between studies can prove to be fatal for students career. In my opinion, students should get some time to prepare for the new culture they are getting in universities but not a long time as this cannot be fruitful for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 6.10837438424 278% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72147651007 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52817331003 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486577181208 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4471428041 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216982840012 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101114817178 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676102466453 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146435180081 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093811045435 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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