Television has many useful functions to play in everyone's life, for some its relaxation, for some it is
companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples and discussion point.
Television is the medium of entertainment which is the best invention of 20th century. People are entertained and enjoyed while watching Television. These days, there is an ongoing debate on impact of such electronic devices on a person’s life. In this essay, I will discuss my point of view with relevant examples and ideas.
Nowadays, after hectic work day, people need to relax their minds. Most of the people took TV as source of enjoyment by watching drama serials daily with their family. For instance, according to a market survey done in early 21st century, the Television was sold drastically high in amount. Hence, saying that each home has Television nowadays would not be wrong.
Similarly, watching television can provide escape from loneliness of an old person. In old age, people usually suffer from depression on being all alone every time. For this is to say, in western countries percentage of watching television increases dramatically in the age group of 50 to 80. Therefore, watching different daily based programs on current affairs and entertainment can provide a good way to live a depression free life.
In a nutshell, watching television play a vital role in people's life. The essay discussed some of the Television impact on our daily life and its deleterious and harmful effects on human health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14678899083 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8076842146 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665137614679 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9382911874 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1428571429 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178394851941 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057176979176 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578977945348 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116366689484 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646078298695 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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