TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans and modern technology, more and more people tend to explore new things around the world. Although many would argue one resource to get information is that enough to sure from news and what happened worldwide, In my opinion, people must get information from several news resources because the world becomes is opening, Furthermore, there are a lot of news is fake on the channels due to there is no censorship. I would suggest two reasons based on general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out is that many benefits quickly stem from the news. Admittedly, the news is omnipresent in our daily life and with the development of communications in the world, I find that news is a center of knowledge from all the directions and incorporates the whole world in it. It gives us information about things which are happening or happened around the world as well as it keeps us updated about activities in your nearby areas. I would like to mention noteworthy research conducted by CSR institute in India. The discovered results suggest that Seventy-Five percent of the people indulge themselves to watch a news moment by moment from different resources due to it will effect on the society such as politics, economy, and labor market.
Secondly, news has a close tie-in motivation and knowledge to the discussion. I still affirm the same idea because there is no guarantee that news is the most important part of our lives. the efficiency of a society is measured by the degree and the quality of its use a many different news resources. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember when I was at university I went to buy a new laptop from the store, but I don't know how much it is, Furthermore, I searched on the internet from a several Web electronic such as Walmart and Best Buy to compare prices before to go to the store to buy a laptop to know how to buy it without any extra money. This is how news could help you out by giving you more things to talk about.
To draw a conclusion, taking what I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that the more you read the News, the more educated and well-informed you become, because you will have a bunch of topics to speak about, and you will have a pre-revision of news which will make you confident of the information you receive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63573085847 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73380294534 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505800464037 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.564836136 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.2 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7333333333 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22303827446 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687482823036 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482151298464 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131195200358 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185462180546 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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