Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
University is one of the fundamental step in our career and future. All the university students try to find the motivation that will push them to be better, get higher grates. Some may agree that University should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. I disagree with this, I believe that more money should go to the university library for two reasons that I mentioned bellow.
First, it will be helpfull for student because they will not spend their money on books. A lot of students when they have to write a research paper or just have to study for a subject, they always check the library first before they go and buy the books. As a lot of people know are very expensive and students sometimes can not afford it. For example, when I was a student the professor of the microbiology gave me a task to write a research paper. At that time the library wasn't`t very useful for the students because the university budge was low because and couldn`t provide enough money to invert in library books. As a result all the students including me had to buy the books that they needed.
Second, students will be more motivated to learn if they will have better learning facilites at the university`s library. In fact the way one place is designed, addition of natural light and comfortable chairs and tables make you feel more relaxed and calm also it will increase ability to absorb knowledge while the learning will be more efficient and effortlessly. For example, when the University of Debrecen built the Life science building library it was very good and useful place, where students had more space for their books and laptops and also there was a lot of natural light and university didn't`t need to use electricity during the day even when there were cloudy days. The library was always full because students really like to study there. Consequently, student felt more motivated to learn for their exams.
To sum up , the investments of the university in their universities library will have a good influence in student. In this way they dont need to spend their money in books and they would have better long term careers.
I believe that investments always led to good outcome while most of the time better than expected.
University is one of the fundamental step in our career and future. All the university students try to find the motivation that will push them to be better, get higher grates. Some may agree that University should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. I disagree with this, I believe that more money should go to the university library for two reasons that I mentioned bellow.
First, it will be helpfull for student because they will not spend their money on books. A lot of students when they have to write a research paper or just have to study for a subject, they always check the library first before they go and buy the books. As a lot of people know are very expensive and students sometimes can not afford it. For example, when I was a student the professor of the microbiology gave me a task to write a research paper. At that time the library wasn't`t very useful for the students because the university budge was low because and couldn`t provide enough money to invert in library books. As a result all the students including me had to buy the books that they needed.
Second, students will be more motivated to learn if they will have better learning facilites at the university`s library. In fact the way one place is designed, addition of natural light and comfortable chairs and tables make you feel more relaxed and calm also it will increase ability to absorb knowledge while the learning will be more efficient and effortlessly. For example, when the University of Debrecen built the Life science building library it was very good and useful place, where students had more space for their books and laptops and also there was a lot of natural light and university didn't`t need to use electricity during the day even when there were cloudy days. The library was always full because students really like to study there. Consequently, student felt more motivated to learn for their exams.
To sum up , the investments of the university in their universities library will have a good influence in student. In this way they dont need to spend their money in books and they would have better long term careers.
I believe that investments always led to good outcome while most of the time better than expected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agrees
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...er or just have to study for a subject, they always check the library first bef...
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... just have to study for a subject, they always check the library first before th...
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...nough money to invert in library books. As a result all the students including me ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, really, second, so, while, for example, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.815 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62988361606 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0806783152 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35251830997 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125792645098 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135419217676 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216970417601 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172561396192 0.0645574589148 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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