Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
This topic is very sensitive because it is a controversial issue. Many feel that as a human we should help the beggars in the street, whereas, others argue that we should not help them in that way. I personally agree that giving money to the beggar is not a proper way to help them.
Firstly, I think that getting easy money indulge beggars not to do work or any job. Everyone has an ability to do work and earn money for living expenses. Therefore, except giving money, we should show them the right way of living and do a job for their self. For instance, when I was a child, I saw that my father helped a poor woman (who was begging in the street) by giving her a job. After getting a job, she and her family become settled as a middle-class economy and they did not beg on the street after that. In a similar way, we should help other beggars for a permanent solution.
The second point, I think that the easy money for the beggars causes many problems for them. Getting the easy money they involve different illegal acts like taking Addiction Drag and playing gambling. Those bad addictions become habitual for the beggars and they beg perpetually. I read an article where some scientist conducted a research on the same topic, where it was mentioned that the beggars are involved in addiction and gambling and become indifferent about their family and life. Therefore, I think the giving money to the beggars are not beneficial, rather it makes worse to them.
Finally, those who want to help the beggars should pay the money to the helping organizations. The organizations who arrange different programs to help the beggars by training them and give them a job. Therefore, the help will be worthwhile for them.
Essentially, from the aforementioned essay, I think that we should not give money to the beggars in the streets. Because those easy money are going to make them more harm than benefit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64601769912 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51452390447 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477876106195 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0292362487 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8947368421 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281294461789 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106224960357 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770997115475 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165282542928 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644441596777 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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