According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public’s lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising .
It has been stated by the author that fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies and still
the positive reviews of these movies increased during the past year . This fact stated by the report
may be true . But the assumptions and reasons that has been taken up is rife with holes and is not
strong enough to reach to the claim that a greater budget is required to reach through
public advertising .
It has been assumed that the contents of the movie reviews is not reaching out to prospective
public . In today`s world , where a single advertisement or even the review of the most flop movie
can reach even to the most remote and rural part of the world within few seconds . If normal public
can get access to the reviews , the prospective viewers can also get access . It has further been
that the it`s because of public lack of awareness that good movies are available . This assumption
totally sounds vague . Some movies have been called good and some bad . The author assumes that
only good movies can not reach people . If movies with a bad story can reach people at a fast rate,
then movies with good stories can also reach the public at the same rate .Public is totally aware of
the released movies . The author claims by taking the support of a report that despite the fact that
there were fewer people who attended Super Screen produced movies , but the percentage of positive
reviews increased and further states the problem that reviews are not reaching out to prospective
viewers . The claim again seems wrong , if there were fewer number of people , then how did the
positive reviews increased . Positive reviews can only increase with more number of viewers . Even if ,
there were less number of viewers , then those must be prospective viewers , otherwise the positive
reviews must not have increased . For example , if we take the case of Comedy Central channel , which
shows different kind of shows like - Friends , The Big bang Theory , Two and a half men etc . Every
show is reaching out to the public . Everyone knows about the story line of these shows . But the show
Friends has gained more popularity than any other show and is known internationally . So here
advertising is not playing a role in gaining a show it`s popularity but the story if the show matters .
A good movie is the need of every public at any place . A good budget must be spent on the movie`s
advertising as well as on its story . Super Screen should allocate greater share of its budget next year
to reaching the public through advertising , but the arguments that stated for this do not seem to be
strong enough for this reasoning .
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 47 15
No. of Words: 457 350
No. of Characters: 2099 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.624 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.593 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.281 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 9.723 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.83 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.383 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.216 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.733 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 28 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, still, then, well, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 457.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90809628009 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45442985923 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424507658643 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 705.55239521 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.8696526401 57.8364921388 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5217391304 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8695652174 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 5.70786347227 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 5.15768463074 543% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 77.0 5.25449101796 1465% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30287750438 0.218282227539 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939774562682 0.0743258471296 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115692608426 0.0701772020484 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904840351917 0.128457276422 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108818384247 0.0628817314937 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.32208582834 82% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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